Draw this again - Rogue

I wanted to try a different approach to this contest... I found things I didn't like about the other picture and tried my best to make it better.

Looking through the details and the rules of the competition you have to redo a CURRENT piece of work in your CURRENT gallery... How much I'd love to grab a really old picture from my archives and redo it, but I decided to follow those particular rules... I also found that this Rogue picture (The before picture) Is my top picture in my gallery. So, as a challenge to myself, I decided to redo a very good picture.

Here is the before from my current gallery : [link]

Here is the after in my current gallery : [link]

Thanks!